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Chapter 1: A Stirring in the Cream

In the quiet dawn of Lancaster County, where the fields stretched wide like a patchwork quilt of golden corn and green alfalfa, Marybeth Yoder awoke to the soft hum of life on the farm. The rooster crowed with its usual self-importance, but today, it felt like a prelude to something... monumental.

She slid out of bed, adjusted her modest nightgown, and peeked out the window. The old barn stood there as it always had, but something felt different in the morning air—as though destiny itself waited near the butter churn.

Today was the annual Butter-Churning Competition, the highlight of the community calendar and the source of many whispered stories. Some said it was the butter that kept the marriages strong. Others said it was the steady rhythm of the churner. Marybeth wasn’t sure what to believe. But she did know one thing: Elijah Miller would be there.

Elijah had returned to the village a month ago after finishing his last barn-raising stint in the next county over. The man had a reputation for being as skilled with his hands as he was quiet with his words. And Marybeth could hardly stop thinking about those hands—broad, strong, and capable of turning timber into homes.


As the sun climbed the sky, Marybeth tied her bonnet with trembling fingers and made her way to the barn. The smell of hay and fresh cream filled the air. The competition was already underway.

At her station, she set up her churn—a family heirloom passed down from generations of Yoders who knew the secrets of perfect butter. Just as she was about to begin, she heard a voice behind her.

"Your churn looks sturdy," a low voice said.

Marybeth turned slowly. It was Elijah.

Her heart leapt as though a choir of angels had sung a particularly scandalous hymn. "Aye," she managed, her voice barely above a whisper. "I sanded it myself."

Elijah stepped closer, his suspenders clinging to his shoulders like a prayer to grace itself. His eyes—steady as the morning dew on fresh wheat—met hers. "Takes dedication to get the wood smooth like that. I admire that in a woman."

Marybeth’s cheeks flushed. "It’s... important to take your time."

Elijah’s lips quirked ever so slightly. "Sometimes it’s the slow churn that makes all the difference."


The competition began with a call to action from the elders. The barn filled with the rhythmic sounds of churners plunging up and down. Marybeth focused on her task, but Elijah’s presence nearby was like a lantern’s glow in the night—impossible to ignore.

As her arms moved the dasher up and down in a steady motion, Elijah sauntered over.

"You’re using too much pressure," he murmured from behind her. "Here..."

Before she could protest, his hands covered hers, gently guiding her rhythm. His touch was firm but tender, like a hymn sung just off-key enough to stir the soul. "See? Let the cream do the work. You just guide it."

Marybeth could barely breathe. She felt the cream thickening under their shared effort. The churner moved smoothly now, rising and falling in perfect harmony.

"It’s peaking," she whispered, her voice trembling.

Elijah’s eyes darkened. "Yah... it is."

The crowd cheered as the elders declared her butter the finest of the lot. But Marybeth barely noticed. Her heart was thudding louder than the barn doors in a winter storm.

As the crowd began to disperse, Elijah leaned in close, his breath warm against her ear. "Meet me at the hayloft after supper... I’ll bring the lantern."

Marybeth’s bonnet slipped askew. She nodded, unable to form words. She knew she was treading dangerous ground, but for once, she didn’t care.

She would follow Elijah wherever this churning path might lead—even into the hay-scented unknown.


Next Chapter:​

Will Marybeth risk it all for the promise of whispered scripture and strong hands? Or will the elders' watchful eyes extinguish her simmering desire?